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		<title>By: yodz</title>
		<link>http://deamer.wordpress.com/2007/06/12/how-to-write-great-reviews/#comment-3837</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 06 Mar 2011 10:21:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This is exactly what I need. I&#039;m writing a review about my recent hotel experience and I&#039;m at a lost on how I would attack it. I have an idea now - thanks for sharing your expertise!!!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is exactly what I need. I&#8217;m writing a review about my recent hotel experience and I&#8217;m at a lost on how I would attack it. I have an idea now &#8211; thanks for sharing your expertise!!!</p>
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		<title>By: Anonymous</title>
		<link>http://deamer.wordpress.com/2007/06/12/how-to-write-great-reviews/#comment-3829</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 28 Jan 2011 16:41:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[thank you very much for the tips]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>thank you very much for the tips</p>
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		<title>By: erica rushton</title>
		<link>http://deamer.wordpress.com/2007/06/12/how-to-write-great-reviews/#comment-3664</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[erica rushton]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Sep 2010 10:26:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[You&#039;re a life saver!  Thanks a million.  I&#039;ve got one due tomorrow of 1000 words - my first one.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re a life saver!  Thanks a million.  I&#8217;ve got one due tomorrow of 1000 words &#8211; my first one.</p>
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		<title>By: Kumar</title>
		<link>http://deamer.wordpress.com/2007/06/12/how-to-write-great-reviews/#comment-3573</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Aug 2010 08:19:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Excellent post. It helped me lot. Thanks.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent post. It helped me lot. Thanks.</p>
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		<title>By: Kim</title>
		<link>http://deamer.wordpress.com/2007/06/12/how-to-write-great-reviews/#comment-3565</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kim]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 28 Aug 2010 17:11:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[this article made me feel like the biggest blogging tool. I highlighted all my sins...so far I am on 6.

Im writing a new review for a Friday night gig at the moment but I have lost all my confidence as a writer, I need an outside opinion (good or bad).
I want to become a reviewer people can trust and have some blogs that are &#039;bait-able&#039;

so, all in all i would appreciate you to give one of my articles a read through and a crit.
super awesome if you do
kim.

(p.s) your post was a relative blog saver. depending on what angle you look at it from...
thanks!!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>this article made me feel like the biggest blogging tool. I highlighted all my sins&#8230;so far I am on 6.</p>
<p>Im writing a new review for a Friday night gig at the moment but I have lost all my confidence as a writer, I need an outside opinion (good or bad).<br />
I want to become a reviewer people can trust and have some blogs that are &#8216;bait-able&#8217;</p>
<p>so, all in all i would appreciate you to give one of my articles a read through and a crit.<br />
super awesome if you do<br />
kim.</p>
<p>(p.s) your post was a relative blog saver. depending on what angle you look at it from&#8230;<br />
thanks!!</p>
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		<title>By: Fad</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Apr 2010 14:57:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I would like to thank you for these tips. After reading through, I now have a clearer picture on how to stay concise and precise about articles that I wish to write on.

I never had the opportunity to learn writing academically in school. Therefore, I resort to self-teaching by picking up tips and pointers from articles like these as I go along. Thanks again for sharing!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I would like to thank you for these tips. After reading through, I now have a clearer picture on how to stay concise and precise about articles that I wish to write on.</p>
<p>I never had the opportunity to learn writing academically in school. Therefore, I resort to self-teaching by picking up tips and pointers from articles like these as I go along. Thanks again for sharing!</p>
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		<title>By: Erin</title>
		<link>http://deamer.wordpress.com/2007/06/12/how-to-write-great-reviews/#comment-3530</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Erin]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Mar 2010 01:35:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This article was creatively insightful and overwhelmingly helpful to the vast number of emerging amateur writers hoping to write that great review and perchance have their voice heard in the rapidly expanding blogosphere.  

The only question I have, being a fledgling blogger myself, is what would be a typical length for a review blog?  One that would be considered concise yet thorough?

Thanks for the great ideas, I found this very helpful for a recent review I wrote of Dinosaur Park by Hayford Peirce on my blog.

Erin
nerdsburgh.com]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This article was creatively insightful and overwhelmingly helpful to the vast number of emerging amateur writers hoping to write that great review and perchance have their voice heard in the rapidly expanding blogosphere.  </p>
<p>The only question I have, being a fledgling blogger myself, is what would be a typical length for a review blog?  One that would be considered concise yet thorough?</p>
<p>Thanks for the great ideas, I found this very helpful for a recent review I wrote of Dinosaur Park by Hayford Peirce on my blog.</p>
<p>Erin<br />
nerdsburgh.com</p>
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		<title>By: Tasha</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Tasha]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Mar 2010 18:57:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m so thankful for this post...I&#039;m writing a review for some English coursework which makes a massive change from all the essays i normally have to write so i want to make mine interesting and awesome...My teacher gave us some general tips to review writing though that mixed with your ten really make a fantastic review: Use an informal tone, humour, adress your reader, descriptive language, opinions, a summary and analysis. 

Another point is to always read back through your work and iron out any typos, you&#039;re a lot less likely to trust someone who makes a simple spelling mistake - it&#039;s sad but true.

But the most important thing is to stick to the topic though there are one to many people who end up talking about something as off topic as what they ate for lunch...

Thanks a million for the post :)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m so thankful for this post&#8230;I&#8217;m writing a review for some English coursework which makes a massive change from all the essays i normally have to write so i want to make mine interesting and awesome&#8230;My teacher gave us some general tips to review writing though that mixed with your ten really make a fantastic review: Use an informal tone, humour, adress your reader, descriptive language, opinions, a summary and analysis. </p>
<p>Another point is to always read back through your work and iron out any typos, you&#8217;re a lot less likely to trust someone who makes a simple spelling mistake &#8211; it&#8217;s sad but true.</p>
<p>But the most important thing is to stick to the topic though there are one to many people who end up talking about something as off topic as what they ate for lunch&#8230;</p>
<p>Thanks a million for the post :)</p>
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		<title>By: Learn And Master Guitar Review</title>
		<link>http://deamer.wordpress.com/2007/06/12/how-to-write-great-reviews/#comment-3522</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Learn And Master Guitar Review]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Mar 2010 22:41:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Just finished my review website ReviewLearnAndMasterGuitar.com and your checklist was very helpful to me! 

Especially your last point, &#039;don&#039;t be afraid to state the obvious&#039; was great advice as I sometimes assume everybody must know what I know :o). 

Thanks for this great post!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just finished my review website ReviewLearnAndMasterGuitar.com and your checklist was very helpful to me! </p>
<p>Especially your last point, &#8216;don&#8217;t be afraid to state the obvious&#8217; was great advice as I sometimes assume everybody must know what I know :o). </p>
<p>Thanks for this great post!</p>
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		<title>By: nappymuse</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Mar 2010 17:30:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[My favorite thing in this post is:

3. Be ruthless when editing – don’t be precious about your “art”. 

It is so easy to go over peoples head with your own psychological babble.  That is why I update and edit my work over a period of time.  Sometimes you have to keep coming back to it with fresh eyes to see...You make know since to anyone with this statement or you said that so many times in different ways etc. etc.

Good one for all us deep self-development types.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My favorite thing in this post is:</p>
<p>3. Be ruthless when editing – don’t be precious about your “art”. </p>
<p>It is so easy to go over peoples head with your own psychological babble.  That is why I update and edit my work over a period of time.  Sometimes you have to keep coming back to it with fresh eyes to see&#8230;You make know since to anyone with this statement or you said that so many times in different ways etc. etc.</p>
<p>Good one for all us deep self-development types.</p>
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